7 thoughts on “The Sorcerer’s Widow: Progress Report Two

  1. I don’t know; several days’ walk, I’m pretty sure. Which doesn’t mean I always remembered that when writing the story; it’s first draft. That’s the sort of thing I may not worry about until the second draft.

  2. I can sell some of Nabal’s magic to other sorcerers there pay for it – there really isn’t anyone around here who could buy them, but in Ethshar there are dozens of sorcerers

    I think there’s a typo here — or, at the very least, the first clause seems much more awkward than normal.

  3. Wow. They sold fake spells to demonologists, and the worst they got was a flogging? They may not be very bright, but I’d say they’re amazingly lucky.

  4. >> Yeah, I think “pay for it” shouldn’t be there.>>

    I’m pretty sure there should be a “to” between “there” and “pay” — she’s talking about how she can afford to buy a tea shop.

    I’m enjoying the book so far! I like Kel. Sent my donation before I began reading.


  5. Ben, let’s just say it’s a good thing they hadn’t yet spent the money.

    Kurt, thanks. Still haven’t had a chance to look at that and fix it; I spent the weekend in a state of sleep-deprived, baseball-accentuated exhaustion.

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