I want to mention that this first draft is rougher than my usual, probably because my outline was sketchier than usual. There may well be internal contradictions; I hope I’ll catch them all and fix them in the second draft. Feel free to point them out in comments in this blog. The general rule is that later chapters are more reliable than early ones, so if, say, Chapter Ten contradicts Chapter Six, Chapter Ten is probably correct, or at least closer to what will be in the final draft.
Chapter Six will be posted Friday night/Saturday morning. Chapter Nine is written. Chapter Twelve is paid for.