Last time looked at: 4/17/17
Last actual wordage added: 4/17/17
Pages added, 4/17/17: 2
Current page count: 12 (see below)
Current word count: 2,950
Estimated final page count: 20-30?
Deadline: June 1, 2017 (anthology)
Comments: Yes, it got shorter again.
A few days ago I looked at what I had and once again threw part of it out. The story had once again gone in the wrong direction; I had over-thought the background, and had too much internal monologue.
This time, though, it finally feels as if I’ve got it right.
I had cut it back to about nine pages, but not all the stuff I removed came from the end — I cut a chunk out of the middle, too.
Anyway, it seems to be finally going in the right direction, with my protagonist not doing anything stupid or reckless (at least, not yet). Progress has been slow, however; I’m not sure exactly why. I’ve been feeling a bit sluggish; maybe it’s just the weather.
Today I finally wrote two full pages, and got things moving a little better. The antagonist has gotten his first lines of dialogue. Still not quite sure how my protagonist will get into the confrontation I want, or how the resolution will play out, but it’s coming together.