{"id":122,"date":"2009-10-13T01:52:34","date_gmt":"2009-10-13T06:52:34","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/?p=86"},"modified":"2017-02-12T06:45:42","modified_gmt":"2017-02-12T06:45:42","slug":"realms-of-light-progress-report-twenty-three","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2009\/10\/13\/realms-of-light-progress-report-twenty-three\/","title":{"rendered":"Realms of Light:  Progress Report Twenty-Three"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s where we stand:<\/p>\n<p>Eleven chapters have been posted to the web.  No money has been contributed toward Chapter Twelve; in fact, I&#8217;m still $2.00 short for Chapter Eleven.<\/p>\n<p>Fourteen chapters have been e-mailed to donors.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve finished writing Chapter Fifteen, and just started Chapter Sixteen.<\/p>\n<p>However, at the end of Chapter Fifteen Carlisle Hsing figured out a big chunk of the mystery &#8212; she had to, if I didn&#8217;t want her to look stupid &#8212; and now I&#8217;m thinking I could maybe wrap this up in about eighteen to twenty chapters, rather than the twenty-five I&#8217;d previously estimated.  That would make for a pretty short novel, though of course it would get longer in rewrite.<\/p>\n<p>I know a lot of authors cut stuff in rewrite, but I almost never do; instead I fill in details I&#8217;d skipped over.  It&#8217;s not unusual for me to add as much as 25,000 words to a 100,000-word novel.<\/p>\n<p>In this case, the first draft might come in as short as 55,000 words &#8212; about the length of a typical Ace Double, nowhere near the modern norm.<\/p>\n<p>The up side is that it would be done sooner; the down side is that I&#8217;d feel as if I was cheating folks who paid $25.00 for a book that short.  If it comes to that, I&#8217;ll want to think of some way to make up the difference for donors.<\/p>\n<p>Not to mention whatever standards FoxAcre Press may have; I haven&#8217;t yet discussed the matter there.<\/p>\n<p>But of course, it may not come to that at all; I&#8217;ve grossly misjudged how long a story needs to be before.  The folk-tales in <i>Among the Powers<\/i> were originally added because the novel was below Avon&#8217;s minimum length, and <i>Dragon Weather<\/i> ran 20,000 words longer than I&#8217;d intended.<\/p>\n<p>So I&#8217;m going to keep writing it, and see what happens.  If it comes out too short, well&#8230; the first draft may turn out to not be the entire story.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s where we stand: Eleven chapters have been posted to the web. No money has been contributed toward Chapter Twelve; in fact, I&#8217;m still $2.00 short for Chapter Eleven. Fourteen chapters have been e-mailed to donors. I&#8217;ve finished writing Chapter Fifteen, and just started Chapter Sixteen. However, at the end of Chapter Fifteen Carlisle Hsing&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2009\/10\/13\/realms-of-light-progress-report-twenty-three\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7,8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-122","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-progress-reports","category-realms-of-light"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/122","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=122"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/122\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":438,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/122\/revisions\/438"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=122"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=122"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=122"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}