{"id":156,"date":"2010-10-27T00:34:56","date_gmt":"2010-10-27T04:34:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/?p=122"},"modified":"2017-02-08T18:24:34","modified_gmt":"2017-02-08T18:24:34","slug":"the-final-calling-progress-report-twenty","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2010\/10\/27\/the-final-calling-progress-report-twenty\/","title":{"rendered":"The Final Calling:  Progress Report Twenty"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/TheFinalCalling20.html\">Chapter Twenty<\/a> is now online.<\/p>\n<p>The serial is paid for through Chapter Twenty-Two.  Chapter Twenty-Three is getting close.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve started writing Chapter Twenty-Five.<\/p>\n<p>Chapter Twenty-One will be posted Wednesday, November 3, but perhaps not at the usual time &#8212; it&#8217;s possible I won&#8217;t get to it until late that evening, rather than the night before, and I&#8217;m afraid any books purchased may not ship until Thursday, November 4th, because I have family plans that may not allow me to get to the post office until then.<\/p>\n<p>And with the usual stuff out of the way, I&#8217;d like to say something about how this novel is developing.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been asked several times whether writing a novel as a serial affects how I work, and I&#8217;ve always answered that I don&#8217;t really know.  Up until now it&#8217;s been a theoretical point of little practical importance.  In the three previous serials I didn&#8217;t see that it mattered.<\/p>\n<p>However, it&#8217;s now moved from the realm of theory to the real world, because <i>The Final Calling<\/i> is turning out to be one of the novels that&#8217;s changing shape as I write it.  That didn&#8217;t happen with the other three serials.  It&#8217;s happened lots of times with <i>other<\/i> novels, but never with a serial before.<\/p>\n<p>It didn&#8217;t matter with ordinary novels because no one but me ever saw the first draft.  This time, though, <i>thousands<\/i> of people have seen at least part of the first draft, so I need to explain what I&#8217;m talking about.<\/p>\n<p>What&#8217;s happening is that as I write it, I&#8217;m rethinking it, mentally throwing out things I&#8217;d intended to include, and adding or altering others, and these changes are significant enough that the complete novel is not going to be the one I thought I was writing for, oh, the first dozen or so chapters.  Or more.<\/p>\n<p>As I say, normally this is no problem; I fix it all in <a href=\"http:\/\/www.watt-evans.com\/theseconddraft.html\">the second draft<\/a> and no one else ever knows anything about it.  <i>This<\/i> time, though &#8212; well, some of what&#8217;s coming up later on may contradict what you&#8217;ve already read.  To cite one trivial example, there weren&#8217;t three Chairmen of the Council of Warlocks in Ethshar of the Spices, there were about fifteen.  More importantly, certain characters are going to do stuff in upcoming chapters that doesn&#8217;t follow very well from what&#8217;s come earlier.<\/p>\n<p>When I revise the novel I&#8217;ll change the earlier chapters, but there&#8217;s no point in doing it before I finish the first draft &#8212; you&#8217;ve already read the original version, and besides, I don&#8217;t <i>do<\/i> that; it slows me down far too much.  Not to mention that when I finish the first draft I may wind up undoing some of the later changes instead; I can&#8217;t really know which stuff I want to keep until I have a complete story.<\/p>\n<p>This may be somewhat confusing or annoying.  I apologize for that.  It will all be fixed in <a href=\"http:\/\/www.watt-evans.com\/theseconddraft.html\">the second draft<\/a>, and the final, published version of the novel will be as cohesive as my usual.<\/p>\n<p>I may be worrying about nothing here; it may be that the shifts will be too minor or subtle to bother most readers.  I honestly don&#8217;t know.  I only know how it looks from <i>my<\/i> side.<\/p>\n<p>But now I know that no, writing it as a serial <i>doesn&#8217;t<\/i> change how I work, but you might wish it did.  And it&#8217;ll change how you read it.<\/p>\n<p>If something doesn&#8217;t seem to fit, or doesn&#8217;t match what you thought you&#8217;d read, it&#8217;s probably not your imagination.<\/p>\n<p>I thought you&#8217;d want to know.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Chapter Twenty is now online. The serial is paid for through Chapter Twenty-Two. Chapter Twenty-Three is getting close. I&#8217;ve started writing Chapter Twenty-Five. Chapter Twenty-One will be posted Wednesday, November 3, but perhaps not at the usual time &#8212; it&#8217;s possible I won&#8217;t get to it until late that evening, rather than the night before,&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2010\/10\/27\/the-final-calling-progress-report-twenty\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7,10],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-156","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-progress-reports","category-the-final-calling"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/156","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=156"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/156\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":398,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/156\/revisions\/398"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=156"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=156"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=156"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}