{"id":535,"date":"2017-02-18T09:39:02","date_gmt":"2017-02-18T09:39:02","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/?p=535"},"modified":"2017-02-18T09:39:02","modified_gmt":"2017-02-18T09:39:02","slug":"work-in-progress-stone-unturned-6","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/02\/18\/work-in-progress-stone-unturned-6\/","title":{"rendered":"Work in Progress:  Stone Unturned"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report:<\/p>\n<p>Last time looked at:  2\/17\/17<\/p>\n<p>Last actual wordage added:  2\/17\/17<\/p>\n<p>Pages added, 2\/17\/17:  0.<\/p>\n<p>Current page count:  489<\/p>\n<p>Estimated final page count:  490-525?<\/p>\n<p>Deadline:  None, but Wildside says they&#8217;ll send me a contract any day<br \/>\nnow.<\/p>\n<p>Comments:  That got complicated.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve rearranged all the chapters, but then there were formatting issues and WordPerfect crashed and&#8230; well, things got a bit damaged.  No text was lost, but I&#8217;m still cleaning up dropped indents and so on.<\/p>\n<p>You will recall that I wasn&#8217;t happy with how the different storylines matched up.  I had them arranged like this (M=Morvash, D=Darissa, H=Hakin):<\/p>\n<p>MDMDMDMDMDMDMDMHMHMHMHMHMHMHM&#8230; (That was as far as I&#8217;d gotten in the second draft.)<\/p>\n<p>Well, now they&#8217;re MDMDMDMHDMHDMHDMHDMMHMMHMMHM&#8230;  And everything lines up nicely.  I think it actually has a better flow, too, starting Hakin&#8217;s story earlier.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m only up to Chapter Twenty-One with the formatting clean-up, and I still want to tweak the chronology a bit (two different sequences wound up in the month of Longdays, ten years apart, which I think is a potential source of confusion).<\/p>\n<p>So there&#8217;s more I should do, but it&#8217;s past my bedtime.<\/p>\n<p>Word-count is now 121,331<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report: Last time looked at: 2\/17\/17 Last actual wordage added: 2\/17\/17 Pages added, 2\/17\/17: 0. Current page count: 489 Estimated final page count: 490-525? Deadline: None, but Wildside says they&#8217;ll send me a contract any day now. Comments: That got complicated. I&#8217;ve rearranged all the chapters, but then there were formatting issues and WordPerfect&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/02\/18\/work-in-progress-stone-unturned-6\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7,22],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-535","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-progress-reports","category-stone-unturned"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/535","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=535"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/535\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":536,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/535\/revisions\/536"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=535"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=535"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=535"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}