{"id":580,"date":"2017-04-01T08:05:01","date_gmt":"2017-04-01T08:05:01","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/?p=580"},"modified":"2017-04-01T08:05:01","modified_gmt":"2017-04-01T08:05:01","slug":"work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/04\/01\/work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher\/","title":{"rendered":"Work in Progress:  &#8220;The Dancing Teacher&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report:<\/p>\n<p>Last time looked at:  4\/1\/17<\/p>\n<p>Last actual wordage added: 4\/1\/17<\/p>\n<p>Pages added, 4\/1\/17:  2<\/p>\n<p>Current page count:  17<\/p>\n<p>Current word count:  4,506<\/p>\n<p>Estimated final page count:  20-30?<\/p>\n<p>Deadline:  June 1, 2017 (anthology)<\/p>\n<p>Comments:  Hmm&#8230; I haven&#8217;t always posted about this one.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m writing this for a specific anthology I got invited to, so it needs to fit a particular set of parameters.  As originally planned, I&#8217;m not sure it did, but then I didn&#8217;t have all of it planned out.  I had the set-up, and I knew how I wanted it to end, but the stuff in between was very vague.<\/p>\n<p>As a result, I&#8217;ve backtracked a couple of times.  The most recent one was tonight &#8212; sort of.  I decided I needed to do a drastic rewrite, so I saved what I had in a separate file and looked at what to cut, and wound up not cutting <i>anything<\/i>.  I just picked up where I&#8217;d left off and added a couple of pages.  I may yet wind up reworking it, but I think I want to finish this version first, just to see whether I <i>can<\/i> get to my planned ending from where I was.<\/p>\n<p>I did make a few changes; originally the viewpoint character didn&#8217;t have a name, and then on page 11 he absolutely needed to have a name because he&#8217;s being formally announced, so he acquired one.  Tonight one of things I did was go back and insert his name right in the first paragraph.<\/p>\n<p>Also, which of the Cousins serves as the setting has changed.  Originally it was set in Skarl, which I realize means nothing to most of you, but Skarl has been mentioned in previous stories both published and un-, and the place I&#8217;m describing in this story is clearly smaller, poorer, and more backward than the Skarl described elsewhere.  I could have moved it backward in time a couple of centuries, but it was just as easy to change the kingdom&#8217;s name to Korza and leave Skarl out of it entirely.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, it&#8217;s coming along; I&#8217;ve set everything in place and the climactic fight should start in a couple of paragraphs.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report: Last time looked at: 4\/1\/17 Last actual wordage added: 4\/1\/17 Pages added, 4\/1\/17: 2 Current page count: 17 Current word count: 4,506 Estimated final page count: 20-30? Deadline: June 1, 2017 (anthology) Comments: Hmm&#8230; I haven&#8217;t always posted about this one. I&#8217;m writing this for a specific anthology I got invited to, so&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/04\/01\/work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-580","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-progress-reports"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/580","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=580"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/580\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":581,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/580\/revisions\/581"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=580"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=580"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=580"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}