{"id":591,"date":"2017-04-18T07:27:28","date_gmt":"2017-04-18T07:27:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/?p=591"},"modified":"2017-04-18T07:27:28","modified_gmt":"2017-04-18T07:27:28","slug":"work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher-3","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/04\/18\/work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher-3\/","title":{"rendered":"Work in Progress:  &#8220;The Dancing Teacher&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report:<\/p>\n<p>Last time looked at: 4\/17\/17<\/p>\n<p>Last actual wordage added: 4\/17\/17<\/p>\n<p>Pages added, 4\/17\/17: 2<\/p>\n<p>Current page count: 12 (see below)<\/p>\n<p>Current word count: 2,950<\/p>\n<p>Estimated final page count: 20-30?<\/p>\n<p>Deadline: June 1, 2017 (anthology)<\/p>\n<p>Comments: Yes, it got shorter again.<\/p>\n<p>A few days ago I looked at what I had and once again threw part of it out.  The story had once again gone in the wrong direction; I had over-thought the background, and had too much internal monologue.<\/p>\n<p><i>This<\/i> time, though, it finally feels as if I&#8217;ve got it right.<\/p>\n<p>I had cut it back to about nine pages, but not all the stuff I removed came from the end &#8212; I cut a chunk out of the middle, too.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, it seems to be finally going in the right direction, with my protagonist not doing anything stupid or reckless (at least, not yet).  Progress has been slow, however; I&#8217;m not sure exactly why.  I&#8217;ve been feeling a bit sluggish; maybe it&#8217;s just the weather.<\/p>\n<p>Today I finally wrote two full pages, and got things moving a little better.  The antagonist has gotten his first lines of dialogue.  Still not <i>quite<\/i> sure how my protagonist will get into the confrontation I want, or how the resolution will play out, but it&#8217;s coming together.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Progress report: Last time looked at: 4\/17\/17 Last actual wordage added: 4\/17\/17 Pages added, 4\/17\/17: 2 Current page count: 12 (see below) Current word count: 2,950 Estimated final page count: 20-30? Deadline: June 1, 2017 (anthology) Comments: Yes, it got shorter again. A few days ago I looked at what I had and once again&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/2017\/04\/18\/work-in-progress-the-dancing-teacher-3\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-591","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-progress-reports"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/591","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=591"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/591\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":592,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/591\/revisions\/592"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=591"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=591"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.ethshar.com\/serials\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=591"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}