A Legend of Ethshar
|proposed Cosmos edition|
In 2005 I conducted an experiment in online serial publication with The Spriggan Mirror, which was more successful than I expected. I decided to try it again, and The Vondish Ambassador was my choice for the next book in the series. (This was influenced by a poll I ran here on the web awhile back.)
In The Unwilling Warlord, a warlock named Vond built an empire in the southern part of the Small Kingdoms; Vond departed at the end of the novel, but the empire he had created survived, under the rule of a seven-person Imperial Council and a young regent named Sterren.
The Empire of Vond was hardly trouble-free after Vond's departure; its neighbors are understandably wary of further expansion, there are questions about how Vond's magic became so potent, and so on. Most of the World, though, doesn't care -- Vond is off there in the southeastern corner of the World, far away from anywhere important.
But one day a dockworker named Emmis watches a Vondish ship arrive in Ethshar of the Spices, and finds himself hired as native guide and aide to someone who claims to be Vond's ambassador plenipotentiary to the overlords of the Hegemony of the Three Ethshars.
Who the Vondish ambassador really is, what his business is in Ethshar, and who's followed him to the city, remains to be seen.
The Vondish Ambassador
by Lawrence Watt-Evans
stiff east wind was blowing, bearing the scent of salt and decay from the beaches beyond the city wall. Such a breeze was chilly and uncomfortable, but it could bring ships into port quickly, cutting travel time, and that might mean happy merchants looking for laborers to unload their cargo. Captains and owners pleased by a quick passage tended to pay well, so Emmis of Shiphaven trotted up New Canal Street with an eye on the sea, watching for any inbound vessel, rather than following his usual morning routine of a stroll up Twixt Street to Shiphaven Market. If that unseasonable wind dropped, leaving ships becalmed in the bay, any hope of being overpaid by cheerful merchants would drop with it.
The richest cargoes were usually landed at either the Spice Wharves or the Tea Wharves, across the canal in Spicetown, but the Spicetown dockworkers had their own little bands and brotherhoods, and Emmis was not particularly welcome there. The Shipping Docks and Long Wharf in Shiphaven were more informal, if only because the work wasn't as steady; nobody there would mind an extra pair of hands.
He reached the mouth of the canal and walked out on the seawall, peering out through the tangle of masts and yards at the Spicetown docks, trying to see whether any ships were running before that lovely wind. He shaded his eyes and gradually swiveled his head to the left.
There! A ship with red and gold sails, hauled over on the port tack, a long multicolored banner streaming from the mizzen. She looked to be southern-rigged, which meant she was from somewhere beyond the river-mouth at Londa in the Small Kingdoms, and she was clearly heading toward Shiphaven, from the look of it steering for either Pier Two or Pier Three.
Emmis turned and trotted west along the seawall to Pier One, where he cut over to the street; he kept a careful eye out to sea, watching the ship's approach.
Pier Two, he decided. Even with the strong wind, then, he didn't need to hurry; he would be there before the ship came in. He slowed his pace to an easy amble.
The ship was starting to reduce sail now, slowing for her final approach. Emmis watched with mild interest, seeing how well the crew handled their duties -- that might tell him something about how he might get the most money from them for the least work.
They did well enough; the mainsail was furled quickly enough, without any corners flapping free. The jibsails came down smoothly, then the topsails, until only the topgallants were still drawing.
When the vessel finally neared the dock, out past the elbow in Pier Two, Emmis was seated comfortably on a bollard, waiting. Rather to his surprise, no one else had appeared on Pier Two; presumably the other Shiphaven laborers had all either already found work elsewhere, or decided to stay inside, out of the wind.
Emmis stood as the ship came gliding slowly in, and raised a hand. A crewman stood in the bow holding a line; seeing Emmis's signal, he nodded and began swinging the rope, building momentum. When he flung it Emmis was ready and waiting; he grabbed the painter and threw a loop around the bollard he had been sitting on, securing it with a neat half-hitch.
Then he trotted toward the stern, where another crewman was readying another line.
A few moments later the ship was secured alongside the dock, sails furled and gangplank out. Emmis waited by the plank -- he knew better than to board any ship without explicit permission from its master, and as yet he had not spotted this vessel's captain. The man at the wheel wore the same faded white blouse and blue kilt as any other sailor, without so much as a hat to set him apart, and Emmis assumed he was merely the helmsman.
There was no sign of a pilot, which might be why the ship was here rather than across the canal in Spicetown; the Newmarket sandbars could make getting to the eastern wharves tricky. The more experienced foreign navigators often made the approach themselves, rather than paying a pilot's fee, but no one here looked very experienced. Judging by the visible excitement among the crew of this vessel, Emmis doubted most of them had ever been in Ethshar of the Spices before.
Then a hat appeared amidships, rising above the coaming of the main hatch -- a large black hat trimmed with a red satin band and a magnificent plume. It was followed by the head wearing it, and the rest of its owner, climbing up the ladder from the deck below.
Emmis watched with great interest as this figure emerged.
He was rather short, with dark hair and a brown complexion; his beard appeared to have been trimmed recently, but had clearly not taken to the idea and bristled unevenly. He wore a red velvet coat trimmed with gold braid, black piping, and gold buttons, and below the coat were fine black breeches. Coat and breeches both had the look of new and unfamiliar garb.
His boots, when they finally appeared, were well-made and, unlike the rest of his attire, well-worn.
Several of the sailors -- not all, but probably a majority -- bowed to this person as he stepped over the coaming onto the deck. Emmis did not go that far, but he straightened up respectfully.
The man in the red coat waved a brief acknowledgment of the bows, then stamped toward the gangplank.
As he approached Emmis continued to eye him with interest. The foreigner was at least forty, perhaps over fifty, though his hair showed only the faintest hints of gray. He had the slightly saggy look of a man who had once been fat but had lost weight, not from healthy exercise but because he wasn't eating well. The fancy clothes fit him well, and had obviously been tailored for him recently, but he didn't look entirely comfortable in them.
He paused at the gangplank and looked along the pier, from the seaward end to the warehouses on East Wharf Street. He took note of the sailors who had secured the lines, of the handful of other workers finally making their way out from shore, and of Emmis, standing there ready.
"Who are you?" he demanded, speaking Ethsharitic with a slight accent.
Emmis did bow now. "Emmis of Shiphaven, at your service," he said.
The foreigner marched across the gangplank and stepped off onto the pier, then turned to face Emmis.
"Do you mean that, or are you being polite?" He had an odd way of drawing out certain consonants; Emmis did not think he had ever heard this particular accent before.
Emmis blinked. "My services are indeed available," he said. "For a reasonable charge."
The foreigner cocked his head to one side. "We will decide later on what is reasonable, but you're hired."
Emmis smiled. "To do what, my lord?"
The stranger did not smile back. "Don't call me that," he snapped. "I'm not a lord."
Emmis wiped his own smile away. "My apologies, sir. I saw them bow."
The foreigner waved that away. "Apology accepted." He turned and shouted, "Fetch my baggage!"
Two of the sailors hastened to obey.
"Come on," the foreigner said, beckoning for Emmis to follow him toward shore.
Emmis did not move. "Sir?"
The foreigner stopped and turned. "Yes?"
"You have not yet told me what my duties are to be, nor my pay. I can't consider myself employed until I know more."
The foreigner nodded. "A reasonable..." He seemed to grope for the right word without finding it. "A reasonable thing," he said at last. "Od'na ya Semmat?"
Emmis blinked. "What?"
"You don't speak Semmat?"
"I never heard of Semmat."
He nodded. "Trader's Tongue? Ksinallionese? Ophkaritic? Thanorian?"
"I've heard of Trader's Tongue, and maybe know a few words," Emmis said warily. "If you're looking for a translator, I might be able to find you one..."
"Ah!" The stranger flung up a hand. "There! You see? You know your duties!"
The little knot of other laborers had reached them; the foreigner waved them past, toward the gangplank, where the sailors welcomed them aboard and began directing them. Brass-bound trunks and leather handbags were starting to appear on the dock, lined up beside the gangplank.
"No, sir," Emmis said. "I don't know."
The foreigner sighed. "You live here, yes? In Ethshar of the Spices?"
"Yes. I was born here, over near Olive Street." He gestured in the direction of his parents' home. "And I live behind Canal Square."
"You know the city well?"
"I suppose so, yes."
"Then I hire you! To know the city for me. To tell me what I need to know, and take me where I want to go."
"A guide? You want to hire me as your guide?"
The foreigner smacked himself on the forehead with the heel of one hand. "Guide! That's the word. I couldn't think it. In Semmat it's almit, in Trader's Tongue it's elfur, and I could not remember the Ethsharitic. Guide, of course. Yes."
Emmis hesitated. He did not particularly like the idea of showing this overdressed barbarian around the city's sights; he would probably want to see the Arena and the Wizards' Quarter, halfway across town, and might be upset that he couldn't meet the overlord face to face. He would perhaps want to poke around parts of the Old City that Emmis did not care to visit. And people from the Small Kingdoms were notoriously stingy, unfamiliar with the prices charged in the big city...
"I will pay a round of silver a day," the foreigner said, interrupting his thoughts. "To start."
"Ten bits," Emmis said automatically. "To start." Apparently this foreigner wasn't stingy, as a daily round of silver was generous to the point of extravagance, but that was no reason not to dicker.
Only after he had responded did Emmis realize what he had done.
"Done!" The foreigner held out a hand.
Emmis grasped it, surprised to be doing so, though the thought of all that silver stifled any regrets. "May I ask your name, sir, and what brings you to Ethshar?"
The foreigner's mouth quirked upward. He turned for a moment, and pointed out several other workers. "You, you, you, and you! Bring those bags -- my guide here will tell you where. And... Emmis, you said?"
"Get that one," he said, pointing to a leather traveling case, "and lead the way to a reasonable lodging."
"For one night, or a longer stay?"
"One or two nights, for now."
As he picked up the leather bag Emmis considered which inn might be willing to give him the best commission without overcharging his new employer too grotesquely. He heaved it up on his shoulder -- it was heavier than it looked -- and began walking toward land.
The foreigner fell in beside him. "As for my name and purpose," he said, "I am called Lar Samber's son, and I am..." He cleared his throat. "...I am, by appointment of the Imperial Council and of the Regent Sterren of Semma, the ambassador plenipotentiary from the Empire of Vond to the court of Azrad VII, overlord of Ethshar of the Spices and Triumvir of the Hegemony of the Three Ethshars."
Emmis almost dropped the bag. "Ambassador?" he said.
"It's the right word, isn't it?" Lar said worriedly. "I practiced saying all that so much..." He shook his head. "I have no knowledge what 'plenipotentiary' means; Sterren didn't think there was any such word in Semmat, but he said it was important. He said 'ambassador' was the Ethsharitic for espovoi, a messenger from one ruler to another."
"That's what it means," Emmis agreed. He glanced back over his unencumbered shoulder to see a line of laborers hauling Lar's other luggage, but no sign of any other retinue. He would have expected an ambassador to have an entourage of aides and underlings, especially an ambassador from an empire. Admittedly, Emmis knew that Vond was a very young empire, having only been formed two or three years ago, and not really very large, but still -- one man, unaccompanied?
"Did you bring your family, sir?" he asked.
"Don't have any," Lar replied. "No staff, so you can stop looking. Just me, my belongings, and my orders -- and enough of the Imperial Treasury to hire you, and to pay my expenses for some time. And you'll forgive me for saying this, but since I have only just met you I think I must -- the money is well hidden and carefully warded, with the most potent protective spells the Empire's wizards could find, so don't think you might rob me."
"Oh, I wasn't! I assure you, I wasn't!" Emmis said hastily. Then he smiled. "But I would have soon, so it's just as well you warned me," he said.
Lar smiled back.
"Emmis, my new friend," he said, "I think this is the beginning of a long and wealthy... no, not that word. A long and profitable relationship!"
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Several years back I conducted a poll on my website of which novel readers wanted to see next, and what was then called The Final Calling got the most votes. People wanted to know more about warlocks.
The thing is, there were some developments I wanted to have take place in the World before I told that story. I wanted to get clearer -- both in readers' minds and my own -- just what had happened to the Empire of Vond after The Unwilling Warlord, because I knew that would tie into the later novel. (I'm trying very hard not to include spoilers here.) I also wanted to let the readers in on a few secrets about how the World works, and how that connects to warlockry.
So I chose The Vondish Ambassador as my second serialized novel. See "About the Vondish Ambassador Serial" for an explanation of how that worked.
The serial went well, the novel was completed on schedule, and here we are.
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- Copyright 2007 by Lawrence Watt Evans.
- The first draft of The Vondish Ambassador was written as a reader-supported serial on this website -- see "About the Vondish Ambassador Serial," or the "Serial Box" blog.
- The final revised and edited version was first published in January 2008 in a limited-print-run trade paperback edition by Misenchanted Press, which was at that time a joint enterprise of the author and Wildside Press; it's now purely the author's. This edition was ISBN 1-4344-0190-1. The last few copies are still available from my "Books for Sale" page.
- Published in hardcover November 2008 by Wildside Press, ISBN 978-1434477620.
- Published in ebook November 2008 by Wildside Press, no ISBN.
- Published in trade paperback January, 2009 by Wildside Press, ISBN 978-1434477613.
- A mass-market paperback edition was scheduled for publication in June, 2009, from Cosmos Books. This edition never appeared, due to distribution problems causing Cosmos to cancel their entire mass-market line.
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